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Post your opening & closing paragraphs of your Icons Artist Statement. Then....


INTRO: Life is short and worth the risk, if you have a dream grab hold of it with both hands and never let go. Joan Jett is a huge inspiration on my life, she is one of the very few women who did the unthinkable, and some minds, impossible. She chased her dreams of becoming a punk rock female artist even though that was never considered possible where she grew up. She plays a huge role in my life because of her motivation and determination to never give up on herself, and not allow others tell her she can’t.

OUTRO: As of right now I see myself “breaking through” I am breaking free from my shell of insecurities, and becoming someone no longer lives in fear, but someone to be fearful of.

1. Explain why you chose this opening/closing combo.
Well, I do not necessarily consider this a combo right now, I think my intro does indeed need a lot of work because its starting off as a concertish and it ends as a pancake. But I do think that the outro is very good and I do not plan on makingtoo many drastic changes to it, because I like it the way it is.
2. How does it tie together your big ideas?
Well I think the way the first line and my outro tie my big ideas together because my paper is about my struggle to become someone to think for myself abnd chase my dreams no matter what, so i think that it sugar coats the idea and if the reader were to read my first and last lines I think they would want to read what's inbetween the lines, and that is what I was going for.

3. Explain the types of thoughts that you hope your reader has when they are done reading your work.
While my reader is reading my paper I would like them to be able to take something away from my writing especially if they were in the same situation I was in because I think it is important for people to be able to think for themselves and make their own decisions. So I would definitly want them to be inspired and walk away thinking and wondering, I don't know exactly what they should be wondering or thinking about but Im hoping my writing had something to with that.